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Hey again! Here for part two :) Again, Pink covered most of it. I've got only one niptick... The earthy smell of the stew is making is filling the room ...

Hey there! Pink pretty much covered it all there but I want to say that Iiked that your characters are different. Sure they are a bit flat but I like ...

Hey! I've haven't read the short story either but I think I will now :) I liked the peom very much. It's light and funny (even if I will understand ...

Hey!First, I want to say I really like the story you are telling, I'm curious of what's going to happen next! Now, on to the review :) Some things I ...

Hey! This is really short but straight to the point. I like it :) You might want to consider continuing this into something else? Sometimes writting about something you lived ...

Hey LiveLaughLove! My first impression was that it was really short. I almost didn't read it but then I thought it wouldn't take me long so why not? It's a ...

Hey! Nice poem there, I enjoyed it :) It was quite choppy, which, in my opinion, adds to the overall tone but I had some touble to read it a ...

Hey! You aren't that bad a poet, I actually quite enjoyed it :) The meaning is really good, admitting we are wrong and say "I'm sorry" is something we, humans, ...

Hey Shear! Another great chapter :) I disagree with Sierra here, I think that parts like this, even if they don't have any big events, have to be there in ...

Hey! Here as promised to review :) First I have to say I really loved the land of dreams you made up when he's drugged! The descriptions are beautiful, the ...

Wow, amazing! It is definitely sad...I feel all weird inside and heartbroken :( The first part, it relates to something that happened close to me so much it made my ...

Hey Wickedwonder! First, I think you can go pretty far with this. It's defenietly interesting and I want to know what going to happen next! Your writting is great :) ...

Hey James B! So this is intriguing! There's so many unawsered questions... what happens after? Why are the men fallowing him? Why is the message so important? The story line ...

Whoa. I really like this :) The idea is great and it's short and sweet. Ofcourse it's lacking of "poetic elements", if I may say it like this. But, I ...

Hey Blackrose! The plot is really great. I enjoy reading your story a lot :) The descriptions are also really great, I can see what's happening in my head. The ...