TheTruthLiesWithin

Hey :) I'm Truth, nice to meet you, and I shall review your work today. First of all, pardon my rustiness, I haven't been on here for a while. So ...

The red tears that spill from my eyes, are filled with boiling blood and painless lies, as if I were bleeding with emotionless sorrow. As if I a was fearless ...

Hey! I'm back :) I woke up later that night . W hen? I wasn't really sure. I felt as if someone was watching me... I instantly shot up in ...

Me again :) Let's start? We traveled the rest of the day, I hadn't had any idea that it was this big... unless we've been going around in circles that ...

Hello! Happy review day :) I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer tonight! I didn't know the woods very well, I just knew how to get to this one ...

Hello sistaah :) Saw you posted some new work and thought I should check it out. Here I am, watch out! Sixteen for the use of one swear word... You ...

Well hello there! I shall review this :) So this sounds fantastik The first paragraph seems to be ranting a little. Starting with love, right into the second sentence, you've ...

Hello! I'm Truth, and I shall also be your reviewer tonight :) My corrections and suggestions will be in red, and my comments in bold... I sat peering from my ...

Hello Aaron :) I'm Truth and I shall review you're work today! My corrections/suggestions will be in red, while my comments will be in bold. I'll probably reformat as I ...

Niki's everything I wish I could be Strong , and brave , and beautiful Niki's never tired and she's never weak She'll never give up fighting , Even though she ...

Hello :) Truth here for a review! I'll quote the whole thing if you don't mind, and edit as I go. Today has been such a weird day. Thomas, my ...

Ocean Obscure Ignorance is the black water with which two/thirds of the world is saturated. Ignorance is the black water With which two/thirds of the body is created. In our ...

Hey there! I'll do a bit of editing for you as I go :) My corrections and suggestions will be in red, and my comments and explanations in bold. May ...

Hey there! :) I haven't reviewed in a really, really long time so please pardon me if I'm a bit rusty... I'll quote the whole thing, if you don't mind, ...

Hey again :) Ooh, love me some parrallel plot lines! Chapter Two -Jamie Mystique Sorrow- Okemos, Michigan USA, Earth Four days before school Present Day… It was only a few ...