TheTaco101

Oh, sorry. I will adjust that. Thanks for letting me know. I guess I couldn't think of another title.. I am terrible at titling my work.

Wow buddy. This was deeeeep! Keenan, I am so happy that you where able to let go of all of that. Personally, if it was me going through all of ...

This is interesting. I think it's a good style and that you did really good with a description of the title. Great work!

Thanks. I guess i couldn't think of any other words to describe it, you know? But thanks so much! I think my big brother will like it :D

Aaw this was cute! :3 Reminds me of my fiancee.

There is nothing here.

Wow. This is trully horrifying. It kept me in the story though. Once I came towards the end, my heartrate picked up and my breathing did too. It scared the ...

Thanks for the feedback! I used to struggle, but now I find it much less painful to write it out in the form of poetry. I will use that website ...

Thanks for the feedback, I will definetly use it in my next poem! ^.^

I know exactly how you feel. I don't know if this is what you're wanting in terms of comentary, but this is amazing.. In a very depressing sort of way. ...

Thanks for the comments. Aah you wheren't too nitpicky, thanks so much for the feedback. Ha excuse my spelling, thanks for correcting it. Again, thanks! I will definately use this ...

Wow. This was amazing. I was so into it by the end I didn't want to stop reading. Great work! I really, really like this.

Very interesting. I liked it. The repetitiveness was interesting, but it did do the story a lot of justice. In the end, though, it was your phrase "I'm beginning to ...

Thanks for the post. I will definitly remember it for next time.

Uuh...Thanks. I am glad for the feedback. I will..I will try them.