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Poetically Arranged Chaos

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery

    The line about offering up a stained glass window is to say that the church cannot give the narrator God; they can only show her a supposed picture of him ...

    Nov 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery

    The story is flash fiction, and is about not connecting with God because of his distance from humanity. Thank you for the review!

    Nov 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery

    Hello, and thank you for reviewing! This piece is from a flash fiction prompt, meaning it had to be ninety-nine words. This piece is meant to portray the struggle of ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery

    Thank you!

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery

    This was a flash fiction piece, specifically for a contest that required it to be ninety-nine words or less. That's why it's so short. Basically, this person comes to the ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: titles are as overrated as my talent

    Thank you so much!

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: titles are as overrated as my talent

    Thank you for reading my essay! Grace is not actually a character I made up; Grace is my name. I realize now that there is no way you could've known ...

    Aug 4, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: side effects may include mood swings

    Thank you! Ten people I know (some online, some in real life) have attempted suicide a collective 13 times. Since they were fifteen at the time, it's fifteen an hour. ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Script » Theatre, Realistic Re: Halfway Boy (Act 1 Scene 1)

    Tag is actually Quinn's Tag-Along, meaning although Quinn thinks of him as a real person, he is only a hallucination. Quinn refers to him as Jackson, because he thinks Jackson ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Script » Theatre, Realistic Re: Halfway Boy (Act 1 Scene 1)

    Any review is good for me. I was thinking when I wrote this that I would design the set myself if it was ever being performed, but I will look ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy

    I was thinking more along the lines of this: -Someone whats to share God with another person (in this case, this person is called their angel. This is because they ...

    May 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy

    That's ok! :)

    May 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy

    This is the most accurate analysis I have ever seen. Are you inside my mind? Thank you so much for reading it!

    May 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy

    Thanks for reviewing! I really stink at punctuation, so I would be happy to accept any tips you have.

    May 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy

    Hi, thanks for reviewing! The "he" this poem refers to is God, so there is the tie-in the the title. Basically, it's about making mistakes in your faith and finding ...

    May 15, 2017


What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music.
— Søren Kierkegaard, Philosopher & Theologian