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Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery
The line about offering up a stained glass window is to say that the church cannot give the narrator God; they can only show her a supposed picture of him ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery
The story is flash fiction, and is about not connecting with God because of his distance from humanity. Thank you for the review!
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery
Hello, and thank you for reviewing! This piece is from a flash fiction prompt, meaning it had to be ninety-nine words. This piece is meant to portray the struggle of ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery
Thank you!
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Enough with the Jesus Imagery
This was a flash fiction piece, specifically for a contest that required it to be ninety-nine words or less. That's why it's so short. Basically, this person comes to the ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: titles are as overrated as my talent
Thank you so much!
Aug 9, 2017 -
Re: titles are as overrated as my talent
Thank you for reading my essay! Grace is not actually a character I made up; Grace is my name. I realize now that there is no way you could've known ...
Aug 4, 2017 -
Re: side effects may include mood swings
Thank you! Ten people I know (some online, some in real life) have attempted suicide a collective 13 times. Since they were fifteen at the time, it's fifteen an hour. ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Halfway Boy (Act 1 Scene 1)
Tag is actually Quinn's Tag-Along, meaning although Quinn thinks of him as a real person, he is only a hallucination. Quinn refers to him as Jackson, because he thinks Jackson ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Halfway Boy (Act 1 Scene 1)
Any review is good for me. I was thinking when I wrote this that I would design the set myself if it was ever being performed, but I will look ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy
I was thinking more along the lines of this: -Someone whats to share God with another person (in this case, this person is called their angel. This is because they ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy
That's ok! :)
May 16, 2017 -
Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy
This is the most accurate analysis I have ever seen. Are you inside my mind? Thank you so much for reading it!
May 16, 2017 -
Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy
Thanks for reviewing! I really stink at punctuation, so I would be happy to accept any tips you have.
May 16, 2017 -
Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy
Hi, thanks for reviewing! The "he" this poem refers to is God, so there is the tie-in the the title. Basically, it's about making mistakes in your faith and finding ...
May 15, 2017
