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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Harry Potter 3OH!3 song parody

    ~~I totally love all of you parodies!(: keep up the fantastic worrkk!

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)

    ~~I loveee thiss(: I'm going to have it stuck in my head all dayy!

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: a dream

    Jemjive-thanks so much!(:

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'll be a Sparrow

    ~I love this, I can really picture someone flying in the sky as a sparrow!

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Elizabethian Sonnet: Bleeding

    ~I love this sonnet! My only complaint is the ending, it seems that the last line has one to many syllables. Other then that I love it, I got lost ...

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Choke

    ~The Holocaust is a very tough subjet to write about, but you definently did it justice! The last line is a great finish! Good Job. I love it!

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love

    ~Thanks everyone for you ideas. I do agree now looking back that it did sound very forced and I realize I used some very vague discriptions. Thanks again!(:

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: a dream

    ~Alyson, thanks so much for the review, and I would love to hear you suggestions~(: Scarlett, I'm glad you enjoyed it(:

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: a dream

    ~Kightley Thanks so much for the review, I agree that I ramble. I just kind of whipped this poem up!(: Thanks for the tips, I'm so new to writing and ...

    Apr 1, 2010


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