TheShauzer

Thank you monsieur Joshua :) I thought realises can be spelled either way? Thank you for the review.

No problem :)

Thanks man, I'm seriously thinking about turning it into something longer as soon as I finish up some other things :D British accents, nice ;) anything in particular you'd like ...

Will do, when I get time :) thanks again for the review

Thanks :) Thinking about what you said I agree with the slitting of the throat, should be more descriptive. I was reading a lot of Stephen King when I wrote ...

Thanks, yep I was thinking about turning it into a book but I have to finish some other things first. Thanks again :)

Definitely, beautiful piece :D Well done

Cool :) it's a lovely piece

I get you :) I'm just more of a descriptive man myself :D

Hey man, read it over again and found it much better than indie the first time, probably because the first time I read it was in the middle of a ...

Okay, well.. I guess if that's how you write than that's how you write :) Good luck with your future stories...

Np :)

Sorry, forgot to mark the first one as a review :)

Yes it was long, thanks for taking the time to review though I'll keep what you said in mind :)

Hey :) thanks for the review, nice suggestions I'll keep them in mind! There's a 2 at the end because in microsoft word I had the pages numbered, I don't ...