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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Lament

    Hey Morrigan. Many thanks for the review and the suggestions. I feel like if I added the why then this poem would no longer be special; right now it (especially ...

    Apr 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: On Love

    Thanks vagrant, that was a real 'they get it' kind of review.

    Apr 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: On Love

    Thanks Reen, I'm glad you liked it. And I'm sure you'll fall in love soon enough, as anyone who wants to does! ;)

    Dec 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: On Love

    Thanks for the review Anma.

    Nov 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Suckle-Pig

    That was a cool take on it, thank you.

    Nov 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Suckle-Pig

    Thanks Doc.

    Nov 20, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: On Love

    Thanks Winny, I appreciate it.

    Nov 19, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Suckle-Pig

    I wasn't going to say because I didn't actually think the question of who the narrator was would come up at all, but it's me talking to myself. Not specifically ...

    Nov 19, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Suckle-Pig

    Interesting critique, thank you. Works better with 'so' :)

    Nov 18, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: On Love

    Thanks Jabber, lovely review.

    Nov 18, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: On Love

    Thanks Aari, I appreciate it.

    Nov 18, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: On Love

    @Miraculor77 spot on, thank you. And thanks for the review @Raelyn

    Nov 18, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: the unyielding man

    That was incredible, really. I loved it.

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: If Only

    Hey thanks a lot Arc, that was a nice review! :)

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Ancient One

    It can either refer to a big tree outside my college whose trunk is bent by the wind (the inspiration), or an old-souled person changing beneath the pressures of life ...

    Sep 12, 2017


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