TheRobster1991

Hi there, I do myself write poetry – though I haven’t done for a while yet. But I hope this review proves useful. The structure is unusual though it looks ...

I think (as a Christian) that I understand what you are saying. There are a lot of voices out there. All telling us different things. All drowning out what appears ...

This was interesting. When I read it, well, it feels like it's written straight from a diary. The while thing with the contradictions in your own emotions: Not just want, ...

First of all, this poem was really good. Yeah, it didn't have much of a rhyming scheme to it but it was beautiful to look at. And it was a ...

Wow Shiney, you have an act for this. I prefer this Dragon in this Profile, mainly because the Knoutlithe is less agressive and is easily tamed. It looks a lot ...

This a very sweet poem. I'm only sorry that I have no constructive critisim to give. I like how each stanza begins with every type of a question: What, How, ...

This will be hard for me to review, as a Christian. You put 25 I believes. And to each one I say: AMEN! On another note, I would print this ...

I had no idea it was about Abortion, I thought it was to do with dreams/ambitions. But it was still very beautiful and a beautiful and unconfrontational message. I can't ...

I really like this. I like this a lot. One of the things that I like the most about this drawing is the incredible amount of detail in it. Particularly ...

This is pretty good for a complete beginner I have to say. It didn't rhyme, but it didn't really need to and I like the way you associated all the ...

Hey, it's me again. This poem was really lovely. I'm only really sorry that I can't offer any advice on how to improve it. It was in my opinion well ...

This is very short, very very short. I don't think I've ever read a poem this short, it's so unusual. The rhyming was simple, but effective. I’ve never wanted anything ...

This has to be possibly one of the sweetest poems I've ever read. My heart melted. It really did. You must be very close to your Grand Father and I'm ...

I wouldn't say it's completely useless. I really liked it, especially the simplicity of it. It wasn't over complicated and in various places it actually made sense. It did in ...

Very interesting. Short and snappy, very thought out crunch words. But, what is it that makes you deformed in the poem. I don't understand? Halloween is mentioned but that doesn't ...