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Re: Visionaries
It sounds good! I'd like to hear it sung :P Although, if your doing Bridge > Chorus then it's better off to take out the last 'Because' Or other wise ...
Oct 18, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter fanfic (from epilogue)
It's quite good! JK Rowlibng finished Deathly Hallows far too quickly, so I'm suprised there isn't anymore fanfics... It's good, except... more description would be quite nice :) Maybe try ...
Oct 18, 2007 -
Re: Faith: Chapter One
Very quick! Maybe you should have added more description so it wasn't all in one chapter (Part...) I think you've really rushed us through the story, I'm not quite sure ...
Oct 18, 2007 -
Re: Student of the Night
I really like this, I don't think it needs a more defined theme... I like the way it just sticks to what it is... and blows you away with the ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Midnight
Wow... no wonder you critiqued so much on my work! 12 and with imagery like this? I bow down to you, master :P I gave you your cherry by the ...
Oct 8, 2007