ThePretentiousEnema

I was actually unsure if I wanted to include those parts (I know exactly which two stanzas you are talking about), but I couldn't help myself, because they carried something ...

Well, it's a bloody shame you feel that way. But then again, aren't feelings in of themselves kind of always melodramatic? I mean of course it's melodramatic, it's right down ...

One more thing, I chose to stay away from the imagery because I personally felt it teared the essence of what I was trying to get across. It creates a ...

emotions grow*

Hi! I chose the italics because I want it to be read like sort of a letter. I'm glad you noticed the purpose of the indentions. About the emo.accusations, well; ...

Also, what you're describing are usually the kind of poems I can't stand reading. I like the words to be straight forward, and the emotions not tucked in under some ...

Well, I mean these pieces are more like therapy. They are meant to tackle a problem, an issue or a bad cycle of thoughts head on. It's not meant to ...

I appreciate the critique. But I read some of your own works before you deleted them all; don't be tossin your stones around. :)

Short, precious and truthful. We've all been down that road at some, I believe: that moment when you convinve yourself that you are not worthy of the one you adore. ...

"I like poems who give room for self-reflection..." Since when are poems people? :P

Thanks for the review, by the way! Glad you liked it.

The mistake is the sex in itself. This poem is heavily infleunced by Joy Division's "Love Will Tear Us Apart".

Very touching. You write with self-awareness and emotion. Keep it up!