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ThePhantomPrince

ThePhantomPrince

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Black Sapphire

    Hey there, hope I fixed most of my mistakes. This was sort of an experiment, but because it seems to have gone well I'm planning on putting out another chapter ...

    Dec 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Black Sapphire

    Just got back to writing, but I took all your advice into consideration, and made a few changes. I know punctuation bugged you, and I did my best to fix ...

    Dec 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Black Sapphire

    Hey, sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I've been in, and out of writing lately. I took in the reviews, and made some adjustments. To ...

    Dec 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Melting Away

    What you said helps a lot, but if I'm being honest I was writing to get the emotions out, not to actually write something good.

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Just another 'My thoughts" again

    I hope this just expression of emotion through your work, and that it helps you feel better when you do. If its not, well there are those of us who ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: a foreword

    I feel like poets are divided into two groups, those that think punctuation is a must, and those that use it only when it improves the piece. If it doesn't ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: It Tastes Like Stardust

    Hey thanks for the review, and let me say when I'm writing anything non-poetry grammar is really important to me. That being said I feel poetry is more emotional. In ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Grimm:End Of time Chapter 1

    I've read my share of RWBY fanfiction but I love your take on it. I'm glad to see you put your own spin on it. Just so you know in ...

    Aug 31, 2016


Anne felt that life was really not worth living without puffed sleeves.
— L. M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables