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  • Poetry » Politics, Historical Fiction Re: This is our land

    A short glossary for the strange words- Mzanzi (Mm-zahn'-zee) n. - The Xhosa word for "our home" or "our country" Voortrekkers (Foo{h}er'-trehck-uhrs) n. - The Afrikaans word for our ancestors ...

    Apr 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Note to Rebel Writer. When using free verse (no fixed rhyme, no fixed verse or stanza lengths, etc) like this poem, ordinary poetry do not need to be upheld. It ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Ryder R. Hood

    It was a pleasure! And please notify me if you are going to publish another SS. I went and read a few of your others, and I like your work!! ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Chapter 1: Alice in Horrorland

    I'm glad I could help! By the way, I like your avatar. Did you do it yourself?

    Apr 8, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Satire Re: An Open Letter By Internal Organs

    Marvelous piece! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Remember the Cotton Candy Days

    Thank you, my dear friend. I do realize that after I edited the piece those life stages went missing, but I shall see if I can incorporate them somehow. Thanks ...

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Remember the Cotton Candy Days

    Sorry to @haven235, I meant to say do not review it again

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Remember the Cotton Candy Days

    I have edited the poem! Please read it again! (but review it again)

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Remember the Cotton Candy Days

    Hi, Haven! Thanks for a great review. I realize that it is a little underdeveloped, and I was planning expanding on it. I was just if you guys liked the ...

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Remember the Cotton Candy Days

    Thank you for this review! I appreciate all your comments, and I shall definitely try and incorporate cotton candy in the second paragraph. Thanks once again! ;-)

    Mar 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 2- The Black Sacrament

    I shall remember that. Thanks Flite!!

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 1:Awakening

    Thanks for the excellent review, steampowered!! I'm glad you liked it! I shall edit the nitpicks and errors you pointed out!

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 2- The Black Sacrament

    Hello there, my dear reviewer! Here’s a few things you might want or need to know about the places, things or people mentioned in this chapter. I won’t repeat previous ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Well, now that you have revealed your nationality, then so must I. I am from the country on the southern point of Africa, aka South Africa.

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Well, now that you have revealed your nationality, then so must I. I am from the country on the southern point of Africa, aka South Africa.

    Jan 18, 2015


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— Danish proverb