TheP3n1sMightier

I absolutely adore this poem. I love how you used repetition for the lines "no crying" it really shows the depth and meaning of how you just want there to ...

I really enjoy your poetry and find strength in these words but I just noticed a few things. Your writing, though fantastic, does the same thing as mine. Your poem ...

I love your poem and understand the feeling of slipping away but I think maybe you should work on some of the vocabulary in your poetry. I'm sure you could ...

It's to say I know that if I told this person how I felt they would be with me but it may turn into a destructive romance so I couldn't ...