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  • Poetry » Literature, Theatre Re: Falter

    Thank you for your review! This is actually inspired by "The Bell Jar" by Sylvia Plath.

    Mon Jan 23, 2023 7:05 pm
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: A Visit to the Cemetery

    This is great! I'd review it but I just finished a big ol' analysis essay for school and my brain is tired so... I like it! It's great! Yeah!

    Fri Mar 26, 2021 2:50 pm
  • Poetry » Health, Lyrical Re: The Frosted Window

    Thank you for the review! As for the "just as you said", it's about how the speaker had hope, gave it up, and has found it again.

    Thu Mar 25, 2021 2:36 pm
  • Short Story » Theatre, Humor Re: Let Sleeping Joes Lie

    Thanks for the review!

    Mon Mar 22, 2021 2:55 pm
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Charlotte

    You're welcome! BTW, you referenced Over the Garden Wall.

    Fri Mar 19, 2021 5:37 pm
  • Poetry » Health, Lyrical Re: The Frosted Window

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad I can give you some hope.

    Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:49 pm
  • Poetry » Health, Lyrical Re: The Frosted Window

    Thanks for your feedback!

    Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:41 pm
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Peanut Butter Cookies

    Thank you ^w^

    Tue Mar 16, 2021 1:19 pm
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Peanut Butter Cookies

    Thanks for the review! I'll fix that typo.

    Mon Mar 15, 2021 10:08 pm
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Peanut Butter Cookies

    Yes, make the cookies! Thanks for the review ^w^

    Mon Mar 15, 2021 1:36 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Revolutionary

    How's the new end couplet?

    Fri Mar 12, 2021 3:17 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Revolutionary

    Thanks for all your kind words! I'll take a second look at the rhythm

    Fri Mar 12, 2021 3:17 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: Ludia's Tempest

    Thank you for the review! You're right, the asking for a turn was kinda dramatic

    Thu Mar 11, 2021 6:40 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Revolutionary

    Thank you! Yeah, I also think the last line is kinda "meh", but I'm trying to figure it out.

    Thu Mar 11, 2021 3:01 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Star Who Fell That Night

    Wed Mar 10, 2021 8:08 pm


Prometheus, thief of light, giver of light, bound by the gods, must have been a book.
— Mark Z. Danielewski, House of Leaves