TheOffBroadwayAuthor

Thank you for your review! This is actually inspired by "The Bell Jar" by Sylvia Plath.

This is great! I'd review it but I just finished a big ol' analysis essay for school and my brain is tired so... I like it! It's great! Yeah!

Thank you for the review! As for the "just as you said", it's about how the speaker had hope, gave it up, and has found it again.

Thanks for the review!

You're welcome! BTW, you referenced Over the Garden Wall.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad I can give you some hope.

Thanks for your feedback!

Thank you ^w^

Thanks for the review! I'll fix that typo.

Yes, make the cookies! Thanks for the review ^w^

How's the new end couplet?

Thanks for all your kind words! I'll take a second look at the rhythm

Thank you for the review! You're right, the asking for a turn was kinda dramatic

Thank you! Yeah, I also think the last line is kinda "meh", but I'm trying to figure it out.