TheLeakyPen

I'm not here to critique, I'm here to voice understanding (if that makes sense). Only a couple weeks ago a college student grabbed my ass (excuse the language). I turned ...

YES YES YES! Ok, this just hit me. Right there you know? (Imagine me pounding my heart/chest area) I love the way you formatted this, especially here "her heart was ...

Hey! Well, first things first I really did enjoy this. It interweaved so much into just a couple paragraphs. It really is amazing how you can fall for someone so ...

This is good. It touches you and you feel a relationship with the speaker. I too have been through hard breakups and sometimes I feel exactly like this. I often ...

Well this has to be one of the best stories I have read so far. It uses language but so much as it seems that all you're trying to do ...

Well, at the beginning of the story I didn't really get what was going on. It was a bit repetitive saying that I didn't know to write over and over ...

Well. My oh my oh my. This is just. I can't even say it, this story is sweet. It is the type of story romantics everywhere will gobble up and ...

This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. It is not very long but is long enough to give you a clear idea of what is ...

Ok so first the worst I always say. There was so much dialouge. I mean dialouge isn't a bad thing but too much can bore the reader to death (at ...

I hate to be mean, I realy do. But it is for editing purposes. This story just didn't grab me. I found myself constantly wondering when it was goin to ...