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TheHiddenMask

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A reconsidered notion

    Well written, I enjoyed reading it.

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Defend Zion

    I like the lay out along with the meaning behind it, the story has a real good feel to it and went pretty smoothly. I enjoyed it!

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: spinning spinning pot

    I would suggest maybe working on the flow of this, it seems a little stressed and put together to me. Try to give it more of smooth lay out maybe.

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Listen

    It was a good base line I think, but maybe go back and add some detail to give us more of a wider picture to make this more interesting.

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pull the Trigger

    Wow. That's all I can seem to say, I could really feel the depth behind the words in this story and it touched me along with many others I am ...

    Apr 24, 2011


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