TheGuiltyOne

If I say "Hey Dogs", it will sound like I am cursing you :P So yes, hey there! :D You are a Phantom it seems, that saunters my dreams. Wandering ...

This is an amazing piece. It has everything- You portrayed perfect emotions! However, the lack of punctuations was a problem. Caress me whereas I do not veil This is the ...

Hahaha! This poem reflects perfect hatred and man, I enjoyed reading this. However, as I started reading, the lack of punctuations pricked me. Time to review ;D I love you ...

Hey there :) I found this piece a little bit cheesy... But perhaps I am just not the "love" type. I liked the way you didn't complicate things for the ...

This piece has a great message hidden behind it. Good job :) But, you have problems with your punctuations and few grammatical errors which you have already figured out. Not ...

Great idea but needs more work. A writer must know how to grab the attention of the reader and in order to do that, you should have described the killing ...

I LOVE every discussion related to this topic and this is an amazing work (Y)! I just wish I'd have another chance to stand next to you while it rains, ...

I love the whole idea of it and bless the poem :D However, I would've liked it better if this was longer with punctuations. Punctuation marks are vital. Walking at ...

I think this is a good piece of work :) Tho, there are few things which would've looked nicer... atleast in my perspective - Little Bird, nothing makes sense for ...

Good work, there :) Amazing way of describing your feelings, I must say. Keep writing! :D

Hey there (: I am going to be your reviewer from here on. Well to begin with, I admire your work because it really shows your hatred towards one. But, ...

Hey there :) Well, these kind of love writings are very common and therefore, one must think and describe differently in order to interest the reader even more. But I ...

Hey (: The concept of this writing is pretty clear - I will give you that. But in my perspective, if this writing was filled with more emotions and of ...