TheCrimsonLady

I absolutely love this short story. Your descriptions are amazing, and I could picture each thing so clearly! I would suggest adding some plot, though. It kind of started to ...

Thank you!!!

Hello, love! Review time! Alright, so I had a hard time getting past all the grammatical and spelling issues. Once I got past them, though, your story flowed nicely. The ...

Morgan Le Fay... that was on purpose, love! I hope to incorporate some Arthurian (is that even a word?) legend later on :)

Ah... reviews. Joy. Thank you, first of all :). I explain that Naith isn't truly evil- only the embodiment of all evil, not necessarily evil herself. Just kind of like ...

Thank you for the compliments! The last paragraph or so when their in the tunnel is a bit off; I wrote it super quickly- my mom imposed a time-limit :). ...

Hello, love! I have issues with reposting thing, I know; my computer sucks and has serious issues:). I have never even heard of true blood; I don't watch tv, but ...

Thank you for your review! I'll get on that!

Hello JohnLocke1! Thank you for your review!!! I wasn't quite sure how to tell more about her world without having her narrate something she wouldn't naturally. I still have no ...