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Erm. Today's The First Day Of School . I Groaned and Go Out Of Bed . I Peeled My Clothes Off and Put On A Grey Plaid Shirt and Shorty ...

A novel, huh? Let us begin. First things first- I would lop off everything before the ЖЖЖ. It's far too much explanation. His father died. His mother died. Now it's ...

Hmm. Intreating story. Quite short, we know. I am somewhat confused. You threw a lot of information about the backstory at us in a very short space of words, yet ...

F-f-fantastic work. I loved the ending. What a twist! Their girlfriends?! HE WOULDN'T! *wipes tear* I have to say this is one of the most gut-wrenching, tear-jerking, heart-to-heart pieces of ...

This is a good poem. I like the idea about writing about insomnia. I think you should pick a stanza scheme, because the rhythm gets lost a few times here. ...

This is an interesting poem. I think you definitely had some nice ideas here. I'm drifting, falling, flying away, away to the place where my dreams live. I'm blurring the ...

WOW the last review is quite mean. I actually liked this poem. It's funky, it's imaginative, it's fantasy. I don't know what an inkling is here, but I love the ...

I love this poem, it's sweet and beautiful and I adore the ending. I like the idea of holding a "fragment of heaven." A tiny matchstick to begin with a ...

Hello, SubjectBlue! I thought this poem was really good, and a good concept too. My favorite stanza was the fourth. I also liked how you kept things sensible- reality as ...

This poem is quite good. I liked the flow- it worked well. The only thing I would have liked to see was a difinative rhyme scheme- do you rhyme them ...

I can just feel myself in this poem. Crisp, clean air fills my lungs, Soft grass tickles my feet as I land. The crickets chirp, with the bees humming along ...

A fitting poem, to be sure. I like the metaphors, and, nice title ;) You're very brave to write about such a thing! I think you've captured that awful pain ...

AWWWW! Now I feel so happy/sad :( :) Anyway, that was very well done. I agree with what you said about Snape! He's this huge jerk in the books, until ...

Great poem subject! I HATE math as well! the only concrit I have is that the poem doesn't really flow as as far as rhyming. Functions and problems, solutions and ...

I'm just going to take it for what it's worth- a funny, short little drabble. I like it :) Don't you just get so annoyed you just write an angry ...