TheClosetKidnapper

Thanks!

I used to be TheLuckyTurtle. xD But thanks! I'll keep these in mind when I edit.

Thanks! I'll get to work on those things.

Thanks! I think I might, although I wouldn't know where to go from here. xD As for your questions, yes he is a fallen angel. He eats and sleeps because ...

Thank you! To answer your question, he was a former/fallen angel, who is now fully mortal.

I understand. I'll work on the background information. Thanks!

xD It's not technically a teen romance. In the next bits, it begins to focus more so on the "different" aspect of the two brothers. I'll figure out how to ...

...Why does it annoy you?

Um... Lycando didn't say anything about Elijah. Just Elizabeth. I'll work on introducing him better, though i don't quite know how beyond what I've already done... Hayden isn't uncomfortable around ...

Thanks for your review! I'll change the spacing soon. I'd originally copy and pasted and didn't think anything of it. Are you saying the first part confuses you? And Elizabeth ...

Well, the quotes were a fail... You're welcome though. This was a great piece and I can't wait to see where you take it. And okay. Your reader might have ...

It's very interesting. I'd be glad to see this develop along the way. Send me a PM when you post another bit? And you aren't bad at explaining things. : ...

I have something in mind, yes, but have yet to lay out the actual melody for it. Composing music is a lot harder than I thought. ; )

Let's not turn this into an argument or discussion please. Yes, I get that his review was meant to better LHeart as a writer, but it was harsh. Do have ...

Thanks : ) And I will, promise.