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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Enchanted Ball

    It's pretty funny that a computer can generate a better story than me :P

    Dec 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Mask Stained Red

    "__________________________________________________________________________" "~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~ ~~ ~" Trying to add more characters I see? :P

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Interlude

    Thank you! ^v^

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Interlude

    I'm glad you figured out how there might be a cycle here. But I didn't want every character to necessarily commit suicide, the idea of the cycle is that a ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Interlude

    Thank you Nankx, I'm glad you like the message! I'll keep in mind what you said about using an expanded vocabulary.

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Interlude

    Thanks Tiny :D I'm glad I could hit you in your feels gut :P I might make another post about the stories, not sure if that will be a poem ...

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Interlude

    Thank you for your review! :) I'm a bit new to poetry, so your advice on punctuation will definitely come in handy!

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Interlude

    No, that's not stupid! I like leaving my works up to the reader's interpretation. What do you think it's about? And thank you for your comment! :D

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Self harm

    You're welcome! ^v^ I'm so glad that I could help. And, hey, lemme tell you a secret... This was my first review ever on YWS! *throws confetti* Yaaay!

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Resolution

    Yeah, sure. You helped me, so I have no problem helping you!

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Resolution

    Thank you! :D The ending wasn't exactly intended to be a cliff-hanger (heh, pun) I just didn't want to end it with "The car fell off the cliff" :P

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Resolution

    Thanks for your advice, it really helps a lot. Especially because I'm pretty new to writing. This is one of my first stories. I realize bits were unrealistic, I do ...

    Apr 25, 2014


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