TheCatchphrase

Hey, Catch here with a review! This was a really interesting poem, the imagery was done nicely and kept me reading. I loved the personification of the dog. Tiny nitpick. ...

A beautiful poem overall. The line breaks are great, the meter of the poem really adds a lot of power to it. I love your word choice and voice. It's ...

This is a beautiful poem! This is the style of poetry I love the most, explaining your idea through the use of another concept instead of outright saying it. The ...

Oooh, I like this one. It's brilliant how the girl reacts to the rain and scenery. I like the idea of the rain being the thing the cheered her up, ...

I enjoyed your poem. I love the metaphor of the weapons being "instruments" that "play a melody", it's really clever. But there is one major problem I noticed. You sound ...