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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Rifle Range

    Hey, Catch here with a review! This was a really interesting poem, the imagery was done nicely and kept me reading. I loved the personification of the dog. Tiny nitpick. ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Mask Stained Red

    A beautiful poem overall. The line breaks are great, the meter of the poem really adds a lot of power to it. I love your word choice and voice. It's ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: Frozen in Time

    This is a beautiful poem! This is the style of poetry I love the most, explaining your idea through the use of another concept instead of outright saying it. The ...

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Wet in the Rain

    Oooh, I like this one. It's brilliant how the girl reacts to the rain and scenery. I like the idea of the rain being the thing the cheered her up, ...

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Self harm

    I enjoyed your poem. I love the metaphor of the weapons being "instruments" that "play a melody", it's really clever. But there is one major problem I noticed. You sound ...

    Dec 5, 2014


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein