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Re: Miss Spoiler
And this is in a literary forum. You can say whatever you want about my bad taste but this is a writer's society, and misusing forum options isn't really something ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Harmony
This poem is not mine, but the story is the idea from the poem. hope you like it and be harsh... Oh, some of the best ideas come from poems. ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Between Shades of Gray
Oh. Your review alone is quite enough to make me add this to my reading list. This reminds me of another, quite different story I've read - Nicholas and Alexandra. ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: You Can't Cheat Death
Whoa, ha ha. What is this I see? You took three things I despise - a cliche, typical young-adult fiction and anthropomorphisms of Death - and turned them into this ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Princess Aaron
There are a few spelling and punctuation mistakes, dear, but I'm going to nitpick. Not really in the mood to. There were a few places where a comma would've come ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Death Card
Not bad! :D I did see the lack of setting, though, but that's just the main problem here. There were a few small things I found bugging me, however... My ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: DELETE
Oh my. Was this poem an 'impulse' thing? I see it's dotted with little errors. They just crush my soul With there lies of deceit 'Their' should be used in ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Dark Light: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter too. There's a little more about the other... fairies? The distinction between fairies and the others isn't very clear (or maybe it's just me). I like ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: I never told you
Well. As a rule I'm not fond of mushy stuff, but I couldn't help going "awww~" at this. I'm not sure whether it was fiction or not, but in either ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Lachrymose and a Clock Tower
Oh, my. My, my, my. This is one of the best things I've read on this site, honest. Feel free to ignore that comment about 'fragments' above mine - they ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Dark Light: Chapter 1
Hmm... to start with your questions: Buster seemed a doggy enough kind of dog to me. But I've only ever actually touched a dog once, so I'm not the best ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: My life's nothing but a script
Ah, beautiful, beautiful. You're obviously a writer with talent for imagery. And it doesn't matter if you don't speak English as your mother tongue, I don't either. In fact, speakers ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Empty Hours
'Tedius'Cloud's already dissected your story's grammatical/verbal failings. I'm not going to. :) Arright. This seems like a prologue-ish start to me. Its length and lack of character description, as w
May 26, 2011 -
Re: I'm Sorry, I Have Lost My Mind
This was lovely. And not just because this includes all three of my most favorite languages ever, but because it was the first work I've read here, and an impressive ...
May 26, 2011
