ThatBeeGirl

I think this is a very interesting poem, and I love how you kept the lines as short as possible, but they still have significant meaning. Just a few grammatical ...

First off, wow! You have an incredible talent with words and coming from someone who loves hearing, reading, and writing slam / spoken word poetry, this piece is very powerful ...

This is utterly, breathtakingly beautiful. Your way with words is enchanting and captivates the reader in your world, the imagery here is magnificent and your use of run on sentences ...

This is a wonderful poem, made even sadder by the accuracy this has on the majority of this technological world we live in. We become so obsessed with our devices ...

This is beautifully written. The love, pride, and adoration the narrator has for the soldier is apparent in the bravery he displayed and the actions he took to protect others. ...

To begin, the imagery in this piece is exquisite. Others may not appreciate the use of metaphor here with the birds and the actions it inflicts upon it's seemingly unappreciative ...

To begin, I think this is beautifully executed and extremely well written. It is simple in format and very short in length, but the power it has in these four ...