ThatAndalite

Nitpicks: The ~ is actually a symbol I use in roleplaying a lot, and I often use it to express friendly communications or an elaborate voice. Other: Considered! I may ...

Okay, so here's what I think, too! 1. The names are intentionally like that. In Reikae, a lot of words are like that.. with two or more letters switched. Mairo ...

I can't help but love all of your work! Oh my god, you! >

Ah, oke.

Also, edits were made.

Two - what makes it unclear?

Mhm!

There's a sentence after the dialogue. Check that.

First paragraph, last sentence. I may have exaggerated, but I can't think of any others.

I think EmptySoul covered everything here. As for reading this.. I'm sorry, but I didn't bother. It's that hard on the eyes for me. Perhaps after you do some corrections, ...

Yep, hehe. And thank you.

Pretty funny, but this should be in poetry or something else. I don't know who'd be that sensitive to a picture of moldy food, but eh. Anyways, I enjoyed it! ...

Thank you! And the words are capital for a reason - as names. If you notice, Death is capitalized, but so is Life. Earth, Sky, Time. Pretty cool, huh?

Oh my gosh, this was amazing! I'd hope to see it on Broadway one day, if they somehow stop doing Cats and Oklahoma!.

Beautifully written.