TexanWriter

I'm so glad it was enjoyed! My friends would freak if they read about nose bug critics. Lily: Yes, it is indeed noticeable. I picked my nose when I was ...

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I'm homeschooled, and my mom says I'd be an A student. But I have no earthly idea.

Thank you all for reviewing! I'll try ro edit as sson as possible, but my computer crashed so I'm having to use a friend's and don't quite have the time ...

Ever read "Where the Sidewalk Ends"? It is chock full of stupid little poems like this that make you laugh your head off. This would almost be good enough to ...

I think this was awesome. Even more so because I know a girl named Piper! Yes, I know it's based off the Pied Piper. One of my favorite fables.

Thanks for the reviews! I will try to work on the said things. And Rosey, Electrum is a real metal, a mix of gold and silver. Though I should probably ...

Sorry for have taken so long to edit this! I am going a completly different path this time. I'll be writing the third chapter soon, if anyone still wants it. ...

This was all right for the start. I think next time maybe you should keep from speaking about your character in the first person unless you introduce special traits to ...

Dear Readers, Thank you for reviewing. I will try to fix everything and be a little more specific. DestinyIsCalling: Thank you for the over-all review! You didn't read the first ...

Thank you all who have helped me! I have edited this a bunch of times, and it is so much better than before :) Thanks again!

This is an interesting story, and I would like to read the next part. I do have one suggestion, though, and it is: PARAGRAPHS!!! I almost didn't read the last ...

Thank you for the critique. Poems aren't really my thing, so this was just a try-it-out kind of thing :) Thanks again!

Thank you, beckiw and Amon360, for your critiques. beckiw: Thanks for pointing out a few things that did seem unclear. I would like to know more about what was confusing ...

I would like to inform my readers that I WILL be rewriting the first chapter. Now I have the whole bok mapped out, and things should seem much better so ...