Teufelshund

The Awakening by Kate Chopin is the worst book I've ever read. I don't mind women's lib, it was just a flat-out poorly executed book imo. Too preachy.

Beautiful.

Good poem. Periods are misplaced, but that was obviosly intentional. I don't know what the poem is trying to say, but -correct me if I'm wrong- is it about lesbianism?

Heven't heard of him...I don't read much fantasy. ...But I love authors in general who have original material, though. ps-The guy must be good, he wears the symbol of a ...

HA! Quite funny...Marx, Hitler, and George Washington are all turning circles in their graves now! And... MKWRFKLV!!!!

A chilling view of... the Biblical end times? (just my guess) I don't know what the point or reason of this was, but ...I still liked it.

MARINES!!! Finally, a writer on YWS incorporates the Marines into one of their stories! Oorah! Seriously, nice work.

It's a good poem. Reminds me of D.A.R.E. classes in elementary. I wish I could give more in-depth advice, but my knowledge of grammar/mechanics/poetry is somewhat limited. So once again, ...