Tessitore

This was awesome. Simply awesome. It's really great to see so much thought into something like this. And you made it really interesting, too! Can vampires turn into bats? No, ...

I don't think there's much to be said that hasn't been said, but as YOU said: Please do not read my poetry if you do not plan on commenting. This ...

Why isn't there a poll option for "God I hate her, she's a plagerising b**** who gets all her ideas from accomplished writers"? I used to be a fan, you ...

Eep, darn school hey you never know may help you! *laughs hysterically* You've never been to that school. Or maybe they just didn't like me. One or the other, they ...

This poem was marvelous. It reminded me of a Snow Patrol song. Look into them. that my smile is as plastic as the white window frame That was a really ...

I have to admit that I had to force myself to keep reading this. It didn't really catch my attention, and I didn't get it. I don't want you to ...

This sounds like something the Dresden Dolls would sing. Just has that air of Alice-down-the-rabbit-hole-ish thing going. What can I say, Soyala? You write beautifully. You felt it more then ...

I liked the last half of the introduction, it had a better flow and was a little less confusion. I ESPECIALLY loved the last paragraph, talking about the seasons. We ...

It was interesting, but what a lot of people don't understand is that this book is FICTIONAL... there's a lot of chaos theory and just plain guesses, though he does ...

I loved the sequal still, but I think I like it much better when you write from a guys perspective. You are a guy, aren't you? You better be, cause ...

*rolls in poetic goodness* I like. Suggestions? streched feline regal belly exposed Too busy. Too many things you want to convey in this line. Break it up and make it ...

First, a few spelling corrections: cigarrette still clenched between her lips Cigarette my waredrobe is comprised mainly of black clothing Wardrobe. for you to to take to Father Flannigan Delete ...

Niiice. I LOVE it when people write abot dreams. I've always had a fascination with them... Few suggestions (keep in mind that I'm a bad poet critic): The mist rose ...

Oops! I see I forgot to reply to this poem... my mistake... gomen... I think that, given the corrections that Avalon, Galatea and Nate suggested, this is going to be ...

More! MORE! I demand more! I must say, this was very amusing and entertaining and all that jazz. I think that you really captured the whole awkward boy-thing... not that... ...