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TessAchtermann

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: I drank the potion

    really creative!!! i love the story, however i felt a little lost, not sure why but i did. the part at the end about the eye lash and the tears ...

    Jan 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Swimming

    I struggle with depression so I can relate to this on so many levels. It is beautifully write and the metaphors and similes are gorgeous. I felt a little bit ...

    Jan 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Early Morning Forest

    This is gergus. I felt like i was there due to the imagery. I hope to see more of your work. This is absolutely beautiful. The "the morning sky bleeds ...

    Jan 14, 2018
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: A Letter to Life

    This is amazing. I love all the different characters, and the part about time. The message was interesting, and I was hooked from the beginning. I also thought it was ...

    Jan 14, 2018


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