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Re: The Myriad, Chapter 1:
Thanks very much, I can definitely see everything that you're saying, and I'll try my best to improve!
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: The Myriad, Chapter 1:
Sorry I didn't realize! I came up with that title a while ago so I wasn't trying to copy you.%uD83D%uDE01
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: F.E.A.R
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Apr 10, 2017 -
Re: Prologue: Lantern on the Ship
Thanks a lot for your feedback. I read the article about the prologue and feel as if most of the criteria applied to this. This won't be the setting of ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: Prologue: Lantern on the Ship
Thanks very much for your points!
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: The Wolf is Still with Us
Hi, this was brilliant. You have a whole host of brilliant ideas pushing through here. I'm loving the idea of the horror stories mirroring the events of the outside world. ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Tales: Chapter 1
And thanks for the birthday wishes on my profile the other day, by the way!!
Feb 23, 2017 -
Re: Mysterious Screams (Chapter 1)
Haha OK I'm sure you were pretty accurate!
Dec 31, 2016 -
Re: Mysterious Screams (Chapter 1)
Yep pretty much.
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Luminous (old version)
It is kinda obvious yeah. Sorry to disappoint you, it was a really cool idea!
Dec 24, 2016 -
Re: The Myriad
Thanks for your feedback! I'll definitely try to act on it!
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The Myriad
Thanks a lot!
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: The Myriad
Hi and cheers for the review I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes there is going to be a romance in the story, its kind of what I want to drive ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Burning Secrets- Chapter 1
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Feb 16, 2016
Hi Terian to review this work. This was really cool and mysterious. Interesting straight off of the bat, with all the fire, and the arrival of the ambulance. Nice job! ... -
Re: Across the Void: Part 4
No thank you for reading! Thanks for the tips I'll definitely act on them!
Jan 6, 2016