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  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: The Never-Ending Cycle

    I don't have much to say except that this is so relatable, I think I might cry.

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Green Beads and Brown Beads

    Thank you so much. I love you:)

    Oct 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Green Beads and Brown Beads

    Hi :) Thank you for your lovely comments. TO answer your question, yes it is about an object that used to be to an estranged loved one.

    Oct 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Star Crossed Lives

    Oh my god, you completely made my day with that response. It's just such a great feeling when someone feels this way about your writing. Thanks for that :)

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Star Crossed Lives

    Thank you :)

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Star Crossed Lives

    Hey thanks for the feedback. Haha, yes I realise the title is a little far fetched, but at the moment that's all I could come up with :p

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Star Crossed Lives

    Thank you so much for your lovely comments :) I didn't extend it further because I feel like I would have probably ruined it if I'd written any more. I ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Stages of Friendship

    I loved this. Absolutely LOVED it! :D :D I am not very good at critiquing poetry, so I am sorry I can't be of much help. But I can't really ...

    Jul 9, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alone

    Thank you so much for your helpful review. I understand your points and see what you mean. This does need a little bit of re-working. And I will do so ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: The power of written words

    Wow! Thanks a lot! :)

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: The power of written words

    Thanks a lot for your comments. I think it is a Chinese proverb. I came across it while reading InkSpell. :)

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: ~Untitled~ Chapter 1: Memories

    Honestly, I don't know that either. Haven't worked out all the details, but I'd like to maybe continue with it. Thank you for the review.

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: ~Untitled~ Chapter 1: Memories

    Hello Rosey! Thank you for the review. Yes, I know I tend to elaborate a little too much while writing. I feel like I need to explain everything, and sometimes ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: ~Untitled~ Chapter 1: Memories

    Hi! Thank you for the review. :) What I meant to basically convey in that line was that seasons, like everything else, change. Summer eventually gives way to the monsoons. ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: ~Untitled~ Chapter 1: Memories

    Thanks! :)

    Jul 8, 2013


The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest