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Re: The Life Cycle of an Unrequited Love
Wow, that last line was such a plot twist. Okay, I am going to go off on a tangent now. Bear with me. Today, I spent my afternoon going through ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: Who am I?" The question I've never quite answered...until now
Oh, this was such a great feel-good piece. Just want to mention a few things that caught my attention. The first line that says "Such a simple question no?" requires ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Give Love a Chance~ Chapter 1
Two words - love it! From the very beginning, you had me hooked. No complains whatsoever. All I can tell you is that this story is really, really good and ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Story I just started writing
Hello! Welcome to YWS. I think you have a great story there. However, I would just like to point out a few things that didn't sit well with me. Forgive ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Don't Ask.~ 2
Two words - love it! “You don’t get it!” Delilah bawled, “It’s how I feel! I can’t help it! How can you blame me for having emotions?! Don’t you realize ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Don't Ask.
I quite enjoyed reading this piece. I like your style of writing, and yes, the stroy looks like it's going to lead somewhere interesting. (Fingers crossed) I am not really ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Ha ha ha!!! I've been on YWS after a year now, and that was the first piece I read since I am back. I am glad this was the one ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (1)
Wow! This was beautiful. Seriously. Never have I ever loved a piece of work as much as I loved this. Honestly, I am at a loss of words. This was ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Life Without You
Hello again! I really like the way that you don't limit your lines to rhymes. I think those kind of lyrics make up great songs. According t me, this song ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Miss You
Cute song. And I love the way you've used the words and the meaning of the song. The only part that I have a little problem is: You used to ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Teenage Disaster 3
Perfect! I've been looking for something to read exactly like what you're writing.Your concept is awesome. Really can't find other words right now. I can't really review your work right ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: ..Xdpyfd.. (Scene 1- Part 2)
Hey! Here's your review. Nitpicks INA: Sorry! I don't want Friendship with you. Instead, you could say "I don't want to be friends with you." Dont want friendship with you ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Xdpyfd.. (Scene 1- Part 1)
Hello, here is the review I promised. So I read your 1st chapter and I’ll read the rest as soon as I get the time. First of all, here are ...
Apr 9, 2009