Published May 27, 2009
Miss You
You were there by my side, and I kept on thinking that it will last forever
But no I was wrong, I never thought that time will be gone
I am just a little princess of my own world, and I wanted that moment to last forever
But now it can’t happen, because I am gone forever
I wanted to be with you
I wanted that to happen, that is so true
You were my life, you were my world
Just wanna tell you
I miss that world
But most of all
I miss you…yeah
I miss you
You used to care about me; you were the best person ever
I left you alone; I wanted to do that never
People told me, that this won’t last forever
But I thought they just wanted to brake our friendship forever
I wanted to be with you
I wanted that to happen, that is so true
You were my life, you were my world
Just wanna tell you
I miss that world
But most of all
I miss you…yeah
I miss you
But who knew, that will come true
I am sorry I left you
…Because you are the best person ever
- Anshita
This is for you Dhritiman...
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Cute song. And I love the way you've used the words and the meaning of the song.
The only part that I have a little problem is:
The last line seems a little out of place. But who knows? maybe with your tune, it fits perfectly.