Teddybear

Thanks!

It's fine, if I choose to review I'll consider it time well spent.

I'll open it up on this computer and see what I can do. I can't promise you'll get a review in a timely manner, or at all, really, but I'll ...

Thanks for this, I'll be working on reviewing some more of your work later on, but it may take a while as I prefer to keep things that I enjoy ...

Thank you for the review! It's going to be pretty helpful not only if I decide to edit this, but also when I'm working on future works. (I'm also glad ...

Okay, thank you, I was worried for a minute there. I don't like to assume the worst but, well, as you saw, I usually do. I'm working on it. I'll ...

Yeah... the whole rhyme scheme thing has never been my strong suit. I'm working on it.

Thank you, I'll try to keep these things in mind when I edit this and in future works.

Thanks for the tips! I'll admit to having been in a bit more of a wordy mood than usual when this was written, and I didn't really feel like trimming ...

Thanks for the review!

I apologize for being too harsh in places, you've already heard any explanation I have to give. I try to be as detailed as possible, so it may not be ...

You're very welcome.

Thanks! I actually write most of my sharts for this writing prompt thing my advisor has us do. We can replace the prompts she gives us, so I like to ...

It might be a little while until you get the review because my house has no wifi and whatnot, but I'll be as detailed as possible.

Will do, I just gotta pick up my lil sis right now, but later I'll get on that.