TealElephant

Hello. First off, this poem was very deep with emotion. I liked that alot. Secondly, the different languages really gave the poem a different some points in the poem I ...

This is now my favorite poem in the history of poems... that's all

haha thanks for the share

Thanks for sharing your intake on the poem!

Thanks! I'm glad the poem made you think "what if..."

Omg I didn't even see the spelling error! I will change that right away! Thank u

Thanks so much!

Thank you

Great ending!

No problem. I like it here too

Wow... this is insanely insane. I'm like literally tying to find something bad but I can't! This poem really made me stop and think. What if I was someone else...??? ...

No... sorry

Thank you so much for the review! I will consider revising the piece!

Thanks for the review! I will take those words into consideration.

The phrase "If only we were smart enough to let down the knife" means we all must just let go of our hardships/burdens and write our own story. Thanks for ...