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Hey Choco! Sorry this took me so long, I kinda forgot. >.< But! Better late than never, right? :D but come on, it was an object. I don't like the ...

Ooh yay, these are longer and I'll have more things to say. ^^ She was praying in church when the stranger came up to her and continued praying while he ...

Muahahaha! :twisted: The letter had arrived on his door step that morning doorstep* When he threw it in fire, the flames consumed all there was so that Frank had no ...

Hey hotthang! I'm Saint, and I'm sure Monki has mentioned me once or twice. :) Like Alianna said, there is a rule here that states you must do two reviews ...

Darling, this is not a cliffhanger -- this is simply you cutting off the story at a *very* bad point. And honestly? If you don't want people to complain about ...

Hello there! I haven't seen you around YWS before! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D The muscles bulging from beneath his tattered sleeves indicated ...

Hello! Thank you for your entry in the On Fire contest, courtesy of the Instructors! :D Here's your complimentary critique! “Notebook and folder, check, Bible, check, pencil case, che—wait, whatâ€

Hi there! Haven't seen you around before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today! :D Just a word to the wise -- it's spelled "existence," not ...

Hey babyboymilky! First of all, welcome to the site! My name is Saint. I'm a Fiction Moderator 'round here, so if you ever need anything in the Fiction forums, give ...

Maki and Zombie: No spamming threads, please, especially in the Literary forums. Please reserve such conversations for PMs. I will delete the spammy posts as I see fit. :) Your ...

*Moderator Note* I changed your topic description again, for the same reasons that I listed before. I'll trust you to take care of any others. ;) -Saint Razorblade The Official ...

*Moderator Note* Changed your topic description to lower-case. All upper-case tends to turn readers away. I left the context as is, but begging for critiques also tends to push away ...

It's Phoenix*, love. ;) Not going to bore you with a highly unhelpful critique. Sorry! Just had to be a spelling Nazi. (It's the town I live in. I'm a ...

**MOVED to Other Fiction** (If I'm wrong about this, please let me know! :D) -Saint Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

Hey there! Welcome to YWS; I haven't seen you around. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today! :D A small note: Generally, it's better to post ...