Teague

Emily scares me. *hides* I'm terrible with poetry; I just like to badger you. Which is why my future reign as Editor-in-Chief will be one of extreme terror. :D ...Deal. ...

Hello there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. I'm Razorblade. Nice to meet you, how are you doing, all that fancy jazz. Lol. ;) Anyway, this is a ...

Hello there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before! I'm Razorblade. Anyway, this is a fairly good piece! You are clearly a talented writer. However, your fatal flaw is ...

Hey Jiggity! How be-eth you? ...I dunno either. xD Well, on to the critique! Sorry if it seems rushed, I kind of am being rushed. xD Positive: Wow! That was ...

...That was really confusing. First of all, I'm not sure what's going on. Your format is very strange and your ideas seem random and not connected at all. It's insanely ...

*eats story alive* Muahaha. Now you're about to learn why my future reign as Editor-in-Chief will be one of terror. ^_^ Your prologue is interesting, but it's more of a ...

Emily didn't read the rules! *pokes you with a fork* You've got to critique at least two things before posting your own work. ¿Comprende? *goes to hunt for the link ...

Can you do me a favour and change the rating of this story to PG-13 for me? You can do that by editing the first post and looking under the ...

Haha, wow... true story, mate. Word always chooses the most random times to break down. Which is why I set my computer to save documents every five minutes automatically, so ...

I may not know what I'm talking about, but this strikes me more as rhyming prose than poetry. Maybe if you formatted it differently, made it into a narrative? I ...

Well, I'm no poetry buff, but I liked this. :D ...I wish I could offer more help, but I'd feel hypocritical because I don't write poetry and consequently know nothing ...

This is a rather short script, m'dear. It's very rushed and nondescriptive- I know scripts are supposed to be that way, but usually they're longer with longer and more in-depth ...

Would you mind doing me a simple favour and spacing out your paragraphs? Put a line between them, like I've just done. When you've done that, let me know and ...

...Wow. That was astounding. Excellent imagery. Excellent emotion. Outstanding piece. Really. You, my friend, have talent. I absolutely adore the Hamlet thing popping back up at the end. But man, ...

MASTERPIECE! Hahaha, Platypus, words can not express how hard I'm laughing at this. Pure comical genius. The end was just plain beautiful. Enough to bring a tear to the eye. ...