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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Is It Only Me?

    thanks again raindrop34!! by the way i totally how like how you recommended i change this to it in "so much time has passed since this was took." i liked ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Is It Only Me?

    thanks so much! I'm editing the punctuation now thanks to raindrop34 so i think i got that fixed. But hey if you got ideas about i could make this longer ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: His Last Words

    no problem cant wait to see to see what you write next:D

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Is It Only Me?

    thanks a lot and anymore comments are welcomed. if you could tell me more specifically what really tripped you up on my poem. and maybe show me how you would ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When I was young...

    hey its me Teacake013 ready to review your literature. just so you know i do not try to say anything that will make anyone mad. so if i do i'm ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When I was young...

    hey its me Teacake013 ready to review your literature. just so you know i do not try to say anything that will make anyone mad. so if i do i'm ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Is It Only Me?

    ok, so i'm not so good a punctuation and form in poems so if ya"ll could help me out with that i appreciate it alot.

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Is It Only Me?

    ok, so i'm not so good a punctuation and form in poems so if ya"ll could help me out with that i appreciate it alot.

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: His Last Words

    no i must thank you one of my best friends has been thinking of doing the same thing your best friend did after i showed this to them they were ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Depending Secrets

    yeah totally

    Apr 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Depending Secrets

    you like completely got it!!!!

    Apr 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Porcelain Doll

    No problem

    Apr 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Depending Secrets

    I really tried to change it from italics but it won't change!!

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Depending Secrets

    Thank you for ure review

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Lyrical Re: His Game

    No problem

    Mar 5, 2015


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien