TazmaniaGirl

Please do not review, or say anyhting mean or rude. I don't mind general coments though!

This is really good, I would advise cutting out the swearing though. Please do more...

Thank You!

Thank You!

This did not apeal to me, and I do not get what's going on here.

No-one listen to monster writer, she's rude :)

Your kinda rude, and I don't care if it didn't draw your attention. Please leave me and my writing alone. Good Bye, thanks.

Wow, so much detail...

Thank you for understanding, and I will!

Yes, I knew that from when I first joined...

And Also, this is not the full chapter, I just wanted to write a bit and get some comments to see wheter it's good or not. Thank You.

Hi, and Thank You for reading. I would like too say something, so please, listen up. I have decided I don't want ANYONE to REVIEW IT BECAUSE all people do ...

I was meant to get Joyuouis spelt wrong, because I thought it'd be like a little pun thing, if you know what I mean. Thank You.

I am next time going to do a chapter each for these characters. I wanted to do this as like a prolouge or something, and please review!

Thank you, I will try to edit and change possible points of more explaination ;)