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A review, as requested! First, nitpicks/grammar. Red is something I changed. :) Curses and prayers, Nobody has the strength to dare. I don’t know how many battles have happened on ...

Oh, gosh. I know you asked me to review this, and I said I wanted to be helpful with my reviews...but this is amazingly well written, for the length of ...

A review as you requested! :D I like this. Its light and funny, and one of those things that even if you loved sparkly-Edward you aren't offended by the mocking ...

Sorry if I repeat, I'll admit I haven't read most of the posts yet. ;) I could go on and on and on, as almost every time the book is ...

She looked behind her should er and groaned. I'd go with "over her shoulder". It just flows better. Sitting on another desk, legs crossed, was Iyten, a man most women ...

Hm, I like this! Since its short, I'm going to try to be super thorough and helpful (and hack it up, as you ordered haha). Hopefully, it works! :D Do ...

Hi! :) I'll try and be thorough here, hopefully its actually helpful. ;) Red is just changes I'd recommend, then I'll put comments and other suggestions. First, I want to ...

A review, as requested. :) Its already been pretty thoroughly reviewed, so I'm just going to do the generals. First, be VERY careful of run-on sentences. You have a lot ...

Since this is short, I'll try and be really thorough. :) Red = minor spelling/grammar correction. If that's not what you wanted, sorry! Wind raised the long curls off the ...

Hello there! :) My review, and I read without once think about stereotypes or anything. Personally, I don't care as long as something is well done and catches my attention. ...

Okay, I am here for a review! I'll try and be as helpful as possible. Hope it works. ;) First, I think you should break paragraphs more. These tend to ...

This is extremely interesting, such a different piece and a neat look into predator vs prey. I enjoyed it, though I will say I have a few nitpicks and comments. ...

I have nothing to say that could be of help to you, as I really loved it. It was just the right amount of everything, and I really like that ...

Welcome! I'm rather new as well, and have the same problems of sitting down and actually writing a whole novel. Mine usually ends up in pieces on the computer, never ...

This is only my second review, so hopefully its actually helpful! I think this has great potential, the idea of her being able to see demons and whatnot. I think ...