TaylaChase

First I'm gonna say good work, and now I'm just going to get right on in to the review. XD Petals falling hopelessly, Crying, Wringing dew tears from the stem. ...

I like the imagery and emotions packed into this short little poem. The rhythm was just a tad choppy, so that's something you could work on, but nothing too bad. ...

Honestly, this was a little confusing to me. It may just be my simple brain, but I didn't really get what it was supposed to be about. What point was ...

I like the rhythm you created in this piece, it goes nicely with the poem. Anyway, I personally enjoy rainstorms, so I might be a little biased, lol XD Hot ...

I thought this was interesting, but I really liked it :D I'm not really sure how to critique it, though, but I think it's an interesting concept. XD I wish ...

I really liked this! I'd say I would definitely like this if it were a song, but it really depends a lot on the music that goes with it. Anyway, ...

Wow, I really liked this. It was a very powerful piece and you could see the emotion there clearly. I thought this was great. :D I like the way you ...

I thought this was well done, good job! And the poor coloured man seemed very discontent, And his grief overcame him at this moment; And he wrung his hands in ...

Wow, I really liked this :D I always wanted to write lyrics, but I could never get it right, so I admire you for being able to come up with ...

Hi, well, this was really good! I do have a few nitpicks to make, though. First off, it was sort of choppy in a few places. I also didn't really ...

It’s so easy, you’re alone Close your eyes and world is gone Not to love and not be loved And to cry in silence [First off, I don't think this ...

Well, for starters, this is really good. I liked it a lot, although it was a little confusing to me. I didn't really get what was going on in some ...

I really can't find anything that needs critiquing about your piece, I just wanted to say that I enjoyed it. A lot of what you say here is very true. ...

This was some good stuff here. Anyway, I have a few nitpicks to bother you with. I remember that day I stopped believing in you. The waves rose high above ...

Wow, I really like this. I have no idea how to critique lyrics to a song, and I don't really know it's that's what you're looking for anyway, but I ...