Tawsif

This is a sweet little story. Almost reads like a children's story. Did you intend it to be a children's story by the way? Could you write a broader version ...

Hi, there! Well, I liked the opening of your story. The description is kind of cliched, the way writing is difficult at first but slowly picks up and brings out ...

Brilliant! That's the word that first popped up in my mind after I'd finished reading it. Brilliant! I loved the way you portrayed the loss of purpose in Rylie's life. ...

Honestly, I'm not a fan of fantasies. But this piece, I truly liked it a lot. I loved your vocabulary. You used a pleasant tone throughout the story that was ...

That was a deep, though-provoking story! I liked how you depicted the monotony of everyday life, how it impinges upon an individual. But maybe it was a little too deep? ...

I like the idea of this story. In fact, I myself had written a story based on this same idea, more or less. The humdrum existence in the city affects ...

I think I agree with Rana. How can you say you're bad at beginnings? Huh? 'My name is Kadence Rae Westfeld. I am seventeen years old. I live a nice ...

I love it! The story intrigued me with its opening. I liked your pleasant tone, the way you wrote 'mama didn’t care much for God, since praying didn’t pay the ...

Hey there, Stellar Jay! I liked reading your story. It's a solid plot you have. You seem to have an aptitude of writing peaceful, nice and simple narrative. I appreciate ...

Hey, there! It's Tawsif coming for a review. I like the plot of your story. The father abusing the daughter for years uninterruptedly, until the daughter matures and comes to ...

Dear ToxicAnglerFish, these memories of childhood haunt me as well, and that's why I particularly liked this piece. I found only one technical fault here. You mingled past and present ...

Hello, Teckster. I'm reviewing after a very long time. So I'm not really sure if this is gonna help you or not. I liked the idea of the story very ...

I loved the story. You used strong and engaging imagery throughout the piece which added to my pleasure. There are moments in our life when we have these dreams, these ...

Hunnybunny, you made me read this story from the beginning till the very end with great interest. Well done, buddy! I loved the way you describe the dog, the emotions ...

OMG! You started with such a language that made me think that it was going to be a story of fantasy or something. And honestly, I'm not a big fan ...