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Re: As I sit at my desk and write.
You never cease to surprise me, PlainandSimple. I thought this was some kind of a flash fiction. But then I saw you told SMlocke that it's actually a beginning of ...
Apr 15, 2020 -
Re: The Sticks [Chapter Six] - REVISED
Hi, Green. I like this chapter. The embarrassing experience of Cas and Poet really touched me. I feel sorry for them now. Also, there was Anam interesting detail about Castle's ...
Apr 15, 2020 -
Re: I wish I hadn’t wished away my time
It's always good to read essays that speak about the narrator's personal experience. And you did an excellent job here in expressing your thoughts and feelings. Well done! The essay ...
Apr 13, 2020 -
Re: Heartbeat
Hi, starlit mind. This was one of those stories that stand out to a reader. I was very much engaged into the story as I read, and it was a ...
Apr 12, 2020 -
Re: Bus Ride
First of all, I actually wanted to give a full-length review, but somehow that comment got posted. Anyway, I'll review it now. I like the tone of the story. The ...
Apr 12, 2020 -
Re: Don't Trust the Light
I never was a big fan of fantasy but I like this story. So you've definitely done a good job. I like the main theme of the story. It is ...
Apr 10, 2020 -
Re: The Sticks [Chapter Five] - REVISED
Hi, Green. I'm reviewing you after a very long time. I'm really touched reading this chapter too. Frustrated too! I mean, why the hell does she have to be like ...
Apr 7, 2020 -
Re: Darkness
This was a different sort of story. And I kind of liked it. The idea in this piece was very strong indeed. You portrayed the fear of darkness in the ...
Apr 6, 2020 -
Re: Outside the City Walls
Wow! Wow, wow, wow! Amazing, I loved it. So far one of the best writings I've ever read in this site. I loved your words. The way you described the ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: To the man who lives in my closet...
I loved reading this. It was short, meaningful, and provocative. Well done! There was a kind of new thing you introduced here. Normally these sort of characters (that closet-man) are ...
Mar 30, 2020 -
Re: To All the Boys Who Never Texted Me Back: P.S. I Still Hate You
Wow, unbelievable! This was fantastically honest. I loved howvyou used deep irony in your examples throughout this poece. Anyone with a heart would feel sympathetic reading this. And I'm a ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Serendipity - chapter 2
I really love the second chapter too. Well done! I particularly loved how you're developing the characters. Each and every character is coming alive with your description. And I think ...
Mar 27, 2020 -
Re: Serendipity - chapter 1
Okay, Cloudthing! A nice little beginning for your Novel 'Serendipity' (And that's a pretty interesting name, by the way), and I liked it! I like the narrator's tone. It's funny, ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: The Sticks [Chapter Three] - REVISED
Oh dear Green, I love it! You really have a great talent of expressing the deep emotions, especially emotions of depression, of fictional characters. You'll go a long way, Green. ...
Mar 12, 2020 -
Re: My Essay on the Rise and Fall of Postwar Independent American Car Companies and Comparing Them To Tesla
Wow, you're so much into cars, huh? I can't even believe it! This was pretty knowledgeable essay, no doubt. You can certainly intrigue car-lovers with this essay. But, just to ...
Mar 12, 2020
