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Re: Three Shots
I was really touched reading this story. It had a sort of dramatic, suspenseful tone that kept me intrigued throughout. Well done! "No one was there to hold her hair ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: ​Verex RACH
Hi, ChrisDixon! I think this story needs a bit of proofreading. There are a number of typos which you'll be able to identify once you proofread the storu. Henry decided ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Stars don't change
Hey there! It's Tawsif here for a review. I like the imagery you used throughout this story. You have a nice writing style. "they had asked Queen Spider about it ...
Apr 25, 2020 -
Re: The Girl Behind the Smile Chapter 1
Well, this started with a bang, when you say you're writing only for yourself and not for the readers. And it ended with another bang, the rape scene! Pretty interesting ...
Apr 25, 2020 -
Re: You and Me
Hey, I'm back again. Another lovely story to read. Usually these kind of stories are the other way round: people confessing about their childhood fears of monsters. But this story ...
Apr 23, 2020 -
Re: Unseen Scars
Wow........ I loved to read this piece. Your sympathetic words surely will be an inspiration for those who are fighting with themselves to heal their pain. There's also a noble ...
Apr 22, 2020 -
Re: The Seasons
You've been admiring my works lately. This time it's my turn to admire yours. This was a really well-thought figurative story. I was fascinated by the way you have personalized ...
Apr 22, 2020 -
Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 4
Another good chapter. I'm loving this novel, Vita. I reallyam. Once again you used brilliant imagery in this chapter. Your description is always so lovely because of that. But I'd ...
Apr 21, 2020 -
Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 3
Quite a suspenseful novel this, I must say. You've done great so far! I love your imagery. You describe them so nicely and deeply, as I mentioned before. It gives ...
Apr 20, 2020 -
Re: My Love
Okay, this is probably a wedding scene, and you didn't mention it anywhere in the story. That's a pretty good job! Makes it more interesting to read. There's really nothing ...
Apr 19, 2020 -
Re: Cherry Blossom:Bonds Unforgotten -Prologue
Okay, Dakhar. Brace yourself for your first review in YWC! A guy has a distant memory of a girl whom he probably left at an early age. This is a ...
Apr 18, 2020 -
Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 2
Okay, another good chapter. Nothing much happened here. The MC took the criminals down in a car, made her first public appearance as a superhero, and then there's a massive ...
Apr 18, 2020 -
Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 1
Okay, my first reaction after reading this: WHY THE HECK DIDN'T I READ THIS BEFORE, MAN? To be honest, I'm not a big fan of action/drama/adventure genre. That's why I ...
Apr 18, 2020 -
Re: the notes of my times with covid-19
COVID-19 is a relevant topic for writers in the current context. So I appreciate this effort of yours to share your ideas on how it feels to be trapped indoors. ...
Apr 18, 2020 -
Re: Lolo's Wake
Hey, Xerphrox. It's Tawsif here for a review. I like your style. It's got gravity, some serious literary weight. I find it very engaging. But the only problem with this ...
Apr 16, 2020
