Tatra

I like this one, it was nice and funny. I really like your bad guy, he sort of reminds me of The Enchanted Forest Chronicles. But, I like how the ...

Very interesting preface, making me wonder what it's going to lead up to. I do think you need to watch your balance between telling everything and telling nothing. The preface ...

So, finally got around to reviewing this great chapter. Although, it did get a bit confusing, the way you jumped around without any markers. I think that you could use ...

I really like this poem, because I really love the ocean. Or anyplace where there's water and waves, I was at a bay yesterday and it was really fun. I ...

I really like this poem, the imagery and what it's about. It's the heartache of a breakup without being cliche. The only thing I didn't like about this poem, however, ...

I like this story, how it's split up between the present and the past. And, I like the imagery. My mind didn't exactly put the picture together while I was ...

I like this poem, how it's searching for a definition of a very tricky word. But, before I go onto my review, I'd like to remind you of the two ...

I like this poem and how it reads. I loved the imagery you used within it. And I like how you can't really tell who the narrator is talking to. ...

Back, again! Another great chapter full of great writing. I loved the imagery of what she went through, and the glimpses of other ghosts that we've scene. I also love ...

I'm afraid I'm going to have to give you another warning, but it's easy enough to correct. This story should be rated with an R, because of F-word. Just click ...

This is an interesting story. The action at the beginning serves well to draw the reader in, and then Khor's mysterious healing makes them continue reading. Very good job. The ...

I like this poem. I'm a bit weird though, I don't find it depressing. :D But, then, one of my favorite songs is Into the Ocean by Blue October... Anyway, ...

This is a really great poem, you really get the feelings across to the reader. But, the lack of punctuation and capitalization makes this a bit hard to read. I'm ...

It was so cool seeing my thoughts come to life within your story, :D I mean, seriously, I wrote that review, click on this story, and then read exactly what ...

Ooh, another good chapter. A great continuation from before, explains some things, but still keeps the reader on the hook. :D I like how she's a ghost, running around in ...