TamaraGoesRawr

This was pretty good; I love your use of words. But I think you need to break it up a bit more, to make it easier to read and more ...

This is good ^^ Everyone can relate to it, and I can't find anything wrong with it. Good job.

The feeling in this is really common; I like that. That's how I feel alot, I know there's something wrong with them and always ask, but when there's something wrong ...

This's really relatable. Especially the part about, her standing beside him, but him not being with her; that's happened to me recently. I liked this poem and really, there's nothing ...

Well, this made me slightly sad but good job.

This poem really had one emotion and was very descriptive; I liked that about it. I also like the way you used words. There's not really anything wrong with it. ...

This is really good, but you had a few mistakes with your apostrophes. Like. "Thief's" should have been "Thieves". But good job other wise, keep writing. [:

I like the fantasy feel of this poem, I can't find anything wrong with it, really.

I love the mental images this gave, and how the first sentance made me want to keep reading. There's really nothing wrong with this, except maybe how you spaced it. ...

I like how it flowed, and they way you used the words. I'm not a Christian, but I could keep reading this over and over again. Good job.

This is really good. But you had a small mistake with capitals on the line where it says " cause you don't even know why you stay"; it's just minor. ...

The overall mood and meaning of this poem is really good, however I don't agree with how you broke it up. I found it was a harder to read than ...

It was good. Maybe just try to break the sentances up a bit more, to make it easier to read.

I like this, it reminds me of a song I know and gives me some really good mental images. I think it's fun and has a good mood behind it.

This is relatable to many teens I think, and it captures alot of feelings that people probably share. I like how you simply stated the facts and the truth. There's ...