TamaraGoesRawr

I liked this poem. But the last two lines. might sound better if you reversed the order. Other than that, great job.

I liked this, but it's a bit confusing. Are you saying that you did something you're not proud of? Other than that small setback, this is good.

This is was good, but I agree with Mellophone; the large words were kind of a setback. Also, I think you need a few more commas so you don't end ...

I like it [: It shows emotions clearly and realistically. Maybe try rhyming a bit more with the ends of sentances. But other than that I can't find anything wrong. ...

I love this. It's kind of humorous, but it also shows alot of emotion. I can't find anything wrong with it. Good job [:

I like the way you stated this. It's true, that everything beautiful fades or dies. One pointer though; maybe try for some more descriptive words, when describing colour and things ...

I like how relatable this poem is [: But try adding some more describing words, just to give that extra something. But really, there's nothing wrong with it. Keep writing.

Honestly this was one of the best I've read so far. The imaginary and the mental images you gave me, and probably most other people, we're vivid and happy. I ...

This is good [: But I think you should try and make it rhyme just a little bit more, so it flows better. I liked the descriptive words and how ...

I really like this. Was it really your first? Hard to believe. ^^ I loved the imaginary paart of this poem, and I'm eager to hear more from you. Keep ...

I liked this. It reminds me of a storry, but I can't remember the name. Is that story where you got your idea? That doesn't really matter, but that's just ...

I liked the imaginary here, but this was kind of confusing to me. The way you worded some things, was what confused me. But other than that this was amazing. ...

They were all good. But I didn't like how you put them all in one post; that makes it kind of hard to read and focus on. I liked the ...

This was your first poem? Well, I sure couldn't tell. It was good and alot of people can relate to the feelings behind it. I couldn't find anything wrong with ...

Hey [: This was really good, but the only thing I'd maybe change was the repeating of the word "sometimes" and where you put that word. The punctuation and descriptions ...